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Chapter 2: Page 45

June 25th, 2019, 11:00 pm

"...guys? Guys I can't move...little help here?" -DPU's

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Ulta June 25th, 2019, 11:00 pm
That went well! ...not really ^^;

This ends Chapter 2! I'll be taking a week break/not break to get the script ready for the next chapter. Then we'll be back ^^ Hope you all are enjoying the ride so far!
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Panther June 25th, 2019, 11:50 pm
All broken @Ulta:

So , good break ^_^

And yes , the DPUs guards needs help .... with lot of reparations
Ulta June 26th, 2019, 1:38 am
@Panther: Least it's just the shells. They seem to still be 'alive' since their comlinks are just fine =) They'll be fine once someone moves their comlink to a new shell.
Panther June 25th, 2019, 11:51 pm
What's happening We may ...... WE MAY 0_o

It was so predictable after the two ruined braces , and Khan thinks "we may" : he's stupid or refuses to admit the truth ?

Meanwhile , luckily his rump is armored ^_^"
Ulta June 26th, 2019, 1:38 am
@Panther: What's a projectile to a butt made of steel! ...or whatever the material is lol

Khan is too clam for his own good. But he's a typical smarty pants in that to best figure something out that's new, you gotta do trial and error! He learned a lot from this occurrence as we'll see next Chapter.
Chrystal June 26th, 2019, 1:51 am
Understatement of the millenium: "We may have a problem here!"


..... Worthy of note that while the inhibitors just went boom without really affecting Star, this one did seem to actually take something out of her.
Ulta June 26th, 2019, 1:34 pm
@Chrystal: I mean that was a rather large-ish amount of element. That probably was quite overwhelming! ...that or she's just scared/worried.
AndreTheLugia June 26th, 2019, 5:54 am
That's a LOT of DAMAGE! Use Flex- jk.
Ulta June 26th, 2019, 1:34 pm
@AndreTheLugia: lol but fitting! ...sorta...
BudgieGryphon June 26th, 2019, 4:49 pm
@AndreTheLugia: even flex tape is no match for Starlight(probablyyy)
GlassGurl June 26th, 2019, 6:55 am
Is anyone else thinking that starlight may possibly be injured! I think that explosion and everything must have really hurt.....
Ulta June 26th, 2019, 1:34 pm
@GlassGurl: Guess we'll find out next chapter!
WiispNightmare June 26th, 2019, 7:01 am
Or shes not injured, just slightly concerned or even frightened. Yikes,,,
Ulta June 26th, 2019, 1:35 pm
@WiispNightmare: Poor thing just imploded in a way...wonder why~
troy8140 (Guest) June 26th, 2019, 7:19 am
Enjoying the ride so far? LOVING IT! Wow!@Ulta:
Ulta June 26th, 2019, 1:35 pm
@troy8140: Glad you think so! ^^
Salen June 26th, 2019, 12:59 pm
Well, someone's property insurance bill just went up.
Ulta June 26th, 2019, 1:36 pm
@Salen: Luckily there's no such thing as money here! They just gotta get their hands on the resources to rebuild. Pretty easy for a place as important as a comlink hub =)
Salen June 26th, 2019, 2:45 pm
@Ulta: That's good, because otherwise they'd be paying through the nose. Either way, I think they're gunna need more than a few minutes to reset the system for anyone else. ^_^;
anergon June 27th, 2019, 12:47 pm
@Ulta: horray for FALGSC (Fully Automated Luxury Gay Space Communism)
anergon June 27th, 2019, 3:00 pm
@Ulta: horray for FALGSC (Fully Automated Luxury Gay Space Communism)
Chrystal June 26th, 2019, 2:41 pm
Surprised that there aren't sirens and alarms going off all over the place, I mean, this is the equivalent of Heathrow airport. If there was an explosion that size in a major airport in our world there would be alarms going off everywhere and armed people rushing around looking for someone to shoot!
Ulta June 26th, 2019, 2:45 pm
@Chrystal: I do admit I should have put alarm sound-effects in these last few pages. I'm just not use to how best to really use sound effects properly, but there ARE sirens going off ^^; Most likely there are creatures already about to tackle the fires, I just wanted to focus on Star for this ending =)
Chrystal June 26th, 2019, 2:55 pm
@Ulta: a note saying "Sirens going off in background" might do it? Or across the top of all the panels after the explosion you could have a wavy line of "weeeeeeeewaaaaaaaaaweeeeeeeeewaaaaaaaaa..." or whatever onomatopea you fancied!
kome (Guest) June 26th, 2019, 5:11 pm
You know, I honestly thought this page would end with Star exclaiming she's okay, while everyone else stares at her previous dead body lying just ten feet behind her.

Or Star-Fluffles.
Ulta June 26th, 2019, 10:09 pm
@kome: As funny and adorable as that would have been, she's not dumb. She knows she just messed up a lot of machinery and maybe hurt some folks possibly...and that greatly upsets her =(
Sulferon (Guest) June 26th, 2019, 6:09 pm
I wish my butt was made of that metal.
Ulta June 26th, 2019, 10:10 pm
@Sulferon: That would suck though. Could you imagine sitting on a rock-hard butt? That sounds soooo uncomfortable!
Sulferon (Guest) June 27th, 2019, 5:25 am
@Ulta: Assuming how many explosions it suffers daily even if it's hardness was any problem it would worth it.
dracone June 26th, 2019, 7:00 pm
That does not look good, Starlight looks like she's in excruciating pain
Ulta June 26th, 2019, 10:11 pm
@dracone: Either it's pain, fear, or overpowering adrenaline. Take your pick!
Chrystal June 27th, 2019, 1:51 am
@Ulta: D) All of the above
Panther June 26th, 2019, 11:08 pm
I'm alive @dracone:

I would say more : mind stunned and shocked of the energetic wave
Panther June 27th, 2019, 5:05 pm
She made it ? Last panel : i love the DPU guard watching at Star , surely thinking "what's happened ?" XD
Mangle (Guest) July 1st, 2019, 9:36 pm
Boom krakalakah, kinda reminds me of the fourth of July
Panther July 2nd, 2019, 10:47 am
Not the same @Mangle:

That's better than to be the Krakatoa explosion ......... ^_^"

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